tanka

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time will keep passing

from warm to cold, from soft to

steep, from going back

to self, to the abysses

of the world and cold hands

 

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2 thoughts on “tanka”

  1. In French, ‘temps’ may mean ‘weather’ or time.I could have used ‘weather ‘ but found the idea that cold and warmth are traveling also through time very poetic. And yes, ‘roide’ is archaic for ‘raide’.Well spotted! And thank you for the quality of your reading!

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